I don't know what I have to amend but I wonder 

how the sun bends into the morning 

how the stars blend into the dark 

how the knife holds my tears so close

how the future is only a ghost 

 Life does not make other plans while you are busy it is without disregard. It can't even remember your name.

July 2, 2023 (11:13pm)

In dreams I walk with you
in dreams I talk to you
that's all I have
my dreams of you
when one day I fall asleep into some eternal dream
will anyone remember and live on to dream about me?